I write a Substack series called Fire Returned to Heaven, transcripts from solitary prayer walks.
Your piece on “consciousness transfer” gave me more clarity on how to share them so readers know why they might care.
Your post gave me the idea to frame each walk by naming the mechanism that unfolded in me (fear turning into trust, control dissolving into rest) in language that is applicable to anyone’s life.
If that resonates, they can then enter the full transcript and see it play out in detail.
Today I wrote the first note taking that takes your advice into consideration.
I wrote it to restack my new post.
Here it is:
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In this walk, I speak about a young man’s struggle with self-worth, but the deeper subject is the passage every man faces between self-fixation and service.
It’s about shifting from healing as self-improvement to healing as preparation, for purpose, sacrifice, and alignment with what lasts.
I write a Substack series called Fire Returned to Heaven, transcripts from solitary prayer walks.
Your piece on “consciousness transfer” gave me more clarity on how to share them so readers know why they might care.
Your post gave me the idea to frame each walk by naming the mechanism that unfolded in me (fear turning into trust, control dissolving into rest) in language that is applicable to anyone’s life.
If that resonates, they can then enter the full transcript and see it play out in detail.
Man that’s amazing. I’m really glad it was able to help.
I’m gonna have to check out your series it sounds interesting. Framing the walks from the perspective of what changed for you is perfect.
Anyone struggling with those same things will be inclined to go deeper to get insights to their own experience and connect with yours as well.
Knowing my ideas gave you some insight means a lot for me.
Stay in touch man.
I’ll check out your stuff.
Today I wrote the first note taking that takes your advice into consideration.
I wrote it to restack my new post.
Here it is:
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In this walk, I speak about a young man’s struggle with self-worth, but the deeper subject is the passage every man faces between self-fixation and service.
It’s about shifting from healing as self-improvement to healing as preparation, for purpose, sacrifice, and alignment with what lasts.
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That’s a great entry point into the topic.
The note speaks to the actual growth someone may experience if they read it which is exactly the goal.
Keep focusing on that and you’ll start to see more and more ways to frame the concepts you talk about.
Your work is very existential so there’s a lot there to work with.
Btw man this was a great read.
I checked out the article and it was really insightful.
I feel like many people struggle with that need for validation and it skews their vision of their whole reality.
Thanks for the feedback!
I'm glad you likes the article. :)